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Chapter 11

As I stood infront of the guys trying to protect htem anyway I could. Dad was trying to intemadate me. As he slowly realized it wasn't working he lefted his fist up to hit me, but before he could i punched him in the stomach which flet good. As he bent over I knocked him upside the head which made him fall to his knees. I gave him time to get back up, before i cruched down and swung my leg to make him fall on his ass, as he landed with a tud I jumped in him and started punching the shit out of him. Des told me to stop when he was unconious. I did, breathing hard I got there stralling my dad. It took five mintues but I calmed down enough, I got up and grabbed a new bag for Desi. "Get your things your coming with-I don't know if your telling the truth but i'm not taking any chances." I started throwing things in there. Desi started helping, but she kept looking at our dad to see if he'll wake but i'm pretty sure he''ll be out fo a while. As we rushed I heard more running upstairs '5...4...3...2...1' I though as my brother showed up in my doorway. "Where do you think your going Jasmine?" "Moving in with Johnny!" I said-yelled at him. "why?" "Stupid question." I looked at him, making a face. He did a doublr take when he saw Desi packing. "Wher she going?" "With me." "Why? Dads going to be pissed when he gets up." He pointed to the unconious 'man.' Hes not even my dad anymore, not even a man. I also didn't noticed HE noticed him on the floor, he obvioulsy wasn't in the room. "Thats why were hurrying before then." Desi was done, standing beside me/behind me. "He'll find you." He said as I walked out the door of our old toom. My mom was on the couch trying to inore what was going on, I stopped to look at her. "Mom I'll see you later." she looked over at me and nod, I do the same back and walked out the door. "Desi with Johnny. And NO flurting." I walk to the trunk and put our bags in there. Then walked to my baby, strudlleding the bike Jake and John. Walk over to me. "Hey you okay?" John asks, touching my shoulder. "Just follow me." John narrow his eyes trying to figure out what I'm about to do. "Baby, are you sure?" Jake asks, looking very senere. "Yeah,  I just need to think." Jake smiles sadly and nods, I stand up as good as I can to kiss him.

As John stood there after, awkwordly. I sat down smiling and started the bike. "Meet me where we went when we were ounger." THen he got it, when I took off he started yelling at me. Its not bad where we went just where we went to releave some anger and do crazy stunts.

JPOV (Johnnathon)
Jasmine wanted to go to our hangout when we wehre younger. Knowing shes willing to go there I knew she seriously needed to cool down, just because when shes like that she can do pretty crazy things. "Jake we have to beat her there or mett her." "What why?" he said, sounding a little worried. "She might hurt herself where shes going, if were not there she'll be there for a while hurt and we WON'T be abe to find her." Once I said that he took off towards the car, me running after him. I got in the drivers side, and took off Desi wasn't ready for me to do that so she hit her head on the seat in front of her. Jakes phone started to ring. "Yeah?...Jasmine might do something stupid JOhnnathong knows where shes going and we have to beat her there." He hangs up the phone and puts on his seat belt. "How long until we get there?" he glances at me. "A few more mintues. Have you seen ANY sign of her boke?" I ask looking around. "No." Great I thought I didn't know is she still had our dirt bikes, moutain bikes, or if shes using her cycle. I hit the gas peddle harder.

We got there pretty fast, Jasmine was NOWHERE in sight, I got out of the car and ran to the first hill I could get to..No Jasmine. I spin around in circles trying to find ANY sign of her. In far distance I hear a motor, I start racing toawrds it. As I'm running towards the noise I remember when we were teenagers this happened before. She just got beaten the shit out of and she wanted to meet in our secret place-which is here- and I couldn't find her, I was running late from work and couldn't make it when she wanted to. I found her in a tree near a hill 3 broken boes, plus a concusion. She was in the hospital  for 4 months, and didn't really remember anything. It took 2 more months to get her to remember. The only thing that made me run faster was the picture of her bones sticking through her skin. After running for a while I found her looking over the edge of the cliff that leads into a lake like 15ft below, with rocks everywhere. "Jasmine?" I say taking caution, the guys- I didn't know where following me until now- stopped behind me. Her bike was running but she wasn't on it, she was standing on the edge of teh cliff not moving just looks like shes thinking. Jake walked up next to me. "Baby?" he says walking this time a couple more steps in fron of me. And I let him I mean if she won't listen to me maybe just maybe she'll listen to him. "Jasmine, come here...Please?" She turns around, and shes crying. Jake goes up to hug her, thats when I knew she wanted to kill herself. It didn't matter how much she loved Jake, it didn't matter if she finally got away from her father, what matter was her sister could've been through what shes been through her whole life. She didn't want that to happen to her, even  if they fight all the time theres, still that love there. Before her sister started hanging out with the people she does now they got along great. Desi was a mini Jasmine it was actually pretty cute when Desi was ounger. I knew him coming, him making her feel like she does RIGHT now. They would be okay, she'll be okay.
So hoped you liked it. This was the last chapter, as u can probably tell I had writers block. but hten i didn't so... yeah.
There'll be a sequel by the way. I just don't know when I'll start posting it. and srry for errors I wrote it on my IPod. Thanks you for reading. Comment PLEASE! Help me make it better for the sequel. :) :kitty: :batman: :tighthug: :wave:
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TheFrenchPinata Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
that us all only "love" lol
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DimitriBelikov Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2011  Student Writer
wat? *confused*
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TheFrenchPinata Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I like it... lol
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DimitriBelikov Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2011  Student Writer
Wouldn't you have to?
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DimitriBelikov Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2011  Student Writer
Wouldn't u have to like it in order to have in done, or to draw it?
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TheFrenchPinata Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I can't draw a story, what are u talking about! lol
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DimitriBelikov Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2011  Student Writer
HAHAHA neither can I but i still try. :)
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TheFrenchPinata Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
lol XD
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DimitriBelikov Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2011  Student Writer
yup :D
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